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We

Friday, January 15th, 2010

(The following essay is a guest post written by my father, poet Rowell S. Hoff, expanding on a theme from a poem he wrote a few years ago.  I have included the poem at the end. -Geoff Hoff)

We

My FatherThe English pronoun we is difficult.

Of course it is not difficult when it refers to the person speaking and the person or persons he or she is addressing. The “royal we,” the “journalist’s we” and the “nurse’s we” (“How are we today?”) are also fairly clear, although odd: they simply mean, in the first two instances, “I,” and in the third, “you.”

But we is often used to refer to an undefined and undefinable mass of persons that includes the person speaking or writing, and this can be difficult to clear up. This usage often appears to refer to all the people of every station in a given country or organization, many or most of whom could not conceivably take an active part in the actions being suggested, as in “We must improve our health care system.” It might be called the “polemic we.”

The polemic we is frequently used in scolding. The child utters a forbidden word at table and the father says, “We don’t say that!” Here, we apparently refers either to the family or to members of a certain class. Taken in its literal sense, the sentence is evidently untrue, for a member of the family has in fact just said the word. Nevertheless, the usage may be justifiable as a concise statement of a principle. Such philosophical or hortatory usage seems reasonable so long as the extension of the pronoun is clear, that is, so long as it is known to whom we refers.

Nevertheless, care is needed. Something possibly true of some of those addressed may not be true of all of them. An example, very often followed by a clause beginning with “but” or “however,” is “We are a peace-loving people,” a sentence that has with minor variations been pronounced by John F. Kennedy, Tony Blair, George W. Bush, and who knows how many English-speaking Presidents, Prime Ministers, Senators, Congressmen, Members of Parliament, Lords, preachers, journalists, etc.

Use of the polemic we often occasions a descent into simple falsehood. A popular example of this is the phrase “We hold these truths to be self-evident” in the second paragraph of the Declaration of Independence of the United States, followed by a series of things that the “we” referred to were alleged to believe, for example, “that all men are created equal,” having “…certain inalienable rights,” etc. This was, in fact, a lie; the signers of the document, many of them slave-holders or involved in the procurement and sale of slaves, all of them leaders in systematically taking over vast areas of North America from its inhabitants by violence and guile, could not, any of them, have believed either that all men are created equal or that they have inalienable rights beyond the right to die. In this case the extension of the pronoun “we” went well beyond the persons who signed the document, for the title line proclaims that it is “The unanimous Declaration of the thirteen united States of America.”

We need to think about these things.

Who?


Doggerel About Who Is We

Here is a question: Who is we?
For pundits, kings and CEOs,

we is I and us is me.
The nurse’s friendly
we is you,
her
How are we today? untrue.

Problematickest of all
is the
we that people use to call
those people
things like
nigger! honky! hunky! wog!

hun! gook! limey! frog!
jap! gringo! running dog!
kafir! bitch! pig! flic!
dago! polack! raghead! spic!
redneck! foreign devil! nerd!
papist! kike! fag! dyke!

People have a hateful word
for people people do not like,
believing that always, come what may,

our we is better than their they.

But the problem’s not so hard to resolve,
so long as the human heart can evolve
to the point where the finally human mind
is in love with the oneness of mankind.

Rowell Hoff
December 27, 2007

O for a Muse of Fire

Monday, November 24th, 2008

O for a Muse of fire, that would ascend
The brightest heaven of invention,
A kingdom for a stage, princes to act
And monarchs to behold the swelling scene!
 - William Shakespeare, Henry V, Prologue

If I have a muse, she seems to have fallen asleep. I wish her good dreams. That she can convey to me once she wakes up and has her first cup of strong coffee. I’ve had my coffee and my pen is poised for the flow of genius.

What interests me about the creative process as much as those times when you can’t stop creating are the times when you don’t seem to get much done. I used to get nuts when I was in that seemingly stagnant place until I realized that it was a necessary part of the process, that I’m always creating and in those times it’s just more subtle. A gestation, perhaps. There are several stories and a couple of novels coalescing in there. Am I mixing my metaphors? Ah, well. As Walt Whitman said:
“Do I contradict myself?
Very well then I contradict myself,
(I am large, I contain multitudes.)”

I am also, I fear, repeating myself. Old Walt has conveyed my feelings on a number of diverse occasions. His passage seems more elegant, somehow, than Emerson’s oft quoted dictum about a foolish consistency being the hobgoblin of little minds. It’s also much more apt to the subject at hand.

Yes, now I am simply rambling, using other poets words to appear knowledgeable and creative, and doing it without any orderly theme or plan. Of course, A. A. Milne said, “One of the advantages of being disorderly is that one is constantly making exciting discoveries.” And as soon as my muse awakens, I’ll convey some of those discoveries to you.

I Am Orange

Thursday, July 3rd, 2008

(©2008 – do not reproduce in any form without express permission from the author.)

I am the color of a summer buttercup
held up to the chin
It glows, do you like butter?
Of the center of an egg
Not a store egg, flat and pale
but farm fresh, straight from the chicken
firm and tall and deep
nutritious, full of flavor
and surprise
Of a leather bound book, soft and supple
I am the color of scotch broom and lily
the delicate feather of a macaw
a winter fire, roaring with heat to keep out the storm
Like the sun on a spring morning
when your desire to run through a field of tall grass
overwhelms you
or the moon on an early autumn early evening
lazy and alive sitting fat and low in the dark sky
when you ache to disappear into the arms of a lover
and entwine yourself with the beating heart of life
I am the red of hunger and the yellow of fulfilment
blended together
bright and vibrant
and I will infect you with my energy.

Los Angeles – July 2, 2008 

Haiku

Friday, April 25th, 2008

One two three four five
He thinks he’s written a poem
Instead, it’s just words

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Geoff Hoff is co-author of the best selling satirical novel Weeping Willow: Welcome to River Bend